"On distinguishing between helpful and unhelpful feedback, Stephen Brookfield gives this example: Unhelpful feedback: “This paper is terrific, well done. You’ve made a lot of progress this semester and you can feel well pleased with your efforts. Keep up the good work.” Helpful feedback: “This paper is terrific, well done. You’ve made a lot of progress this semester, particularly in three important areas: 1) You are much more careful about citing evidence in support of your arguments. For example, at the bottom of p. 12 you quote 3 sources to support your contention that critical thinking is a contested concept….. 2) You’ve taken much greater trouble to acknowledge viewpoints opposed to, and critical of, your own. A good example of this is your discussion on Skinner’s work on page 7. 3) You’re cutting down on your use of unnecessary jargon….”" Source: The skilful teacher: On technique, trust, and responsiveness in the classroom, Brookfield, SD, 2015
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